I have the thesis statement : There are several benefits for paying students who take part in athletic activities even though some people and organizations argue that it is not right to do so. ( add a reason for benefits in the thesis)
intro: start with a case scenario story based example, using he/she. must be 2-3 paragraphs
Body: Must use 3 different sources in each body paragraph
Topic sentence for body paragraph 1: It is a source of good income to the needy and other athlete students.
-students generate a lot of income for the NCAA and their schools after participating in athletic activities.
Topic sentence for body paragraph 2: The second benefit of paying athlete students is that it leads to attraction and growth of many talents.
-payment motivate a large number of students to take part in the athlete activities.
-students get motivated to invest in there talents.
topic sentence for body paragraph 3: The third benefit if paying student athletes is that it prevents cases of corruption among the officials and allows equal distribution of the revenue earned.
-enhancing strategies to pay the students will minimize and eliminate some of these cases from taking place.
-the money will be evenly distributed among the student athlete team members and the school officials.
Conclusion : must be 2-3 paragraphs revisiting the case scenario example from intro.
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