Hi I just need to revise the essay

The argument needs a sharper focus. That the play is a revenge play is not quite sharp or argumentative enough; focus as soon as possible on some aspect of revenge in the play — perhaps the most significant ways each son’s approach is different. At this stage, the argument is unclear, and development stalls.

By the time you discuss Gertrude, there is a better focus for that particular sub-topic, and that might help you define the broader argument: Hamlet’s purposes seem more complicated that those of Fortinbras or Laertes.

The later development is good, and needs mainly to be reframed slightly after your main argument is clearer.

MLA: look up how to format various types of titles.

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