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Write an essay in which you analyze a TV show or a film of your choice. Your paper should analyze ONE of the following:
Criteria | Poor | Fair | Good |
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Thesis/Central Point (30%) |
Writer’s thesis or central point regarding the analysis is not clear. (0-10 points) |
Writer states central point or thesis statement. Thesis statement or central point is somewhat developed. (11-20 points) |
Writer’s thesis statement or central point is thoughtful, complex and thoroughly explained. (21 – 30 points) |
Textual Evidence/Analysis (30%) |
Evidence is not specific. Writer does not include at least three pieces of textual evidence. Evidence is simple and not fully explored and/or analyzed. Evidence does not support the writer’s thesis. (0-10 points) |
Includes at least three textual references to back up thesis, but they are not thoroughly explained, examined and/or analyzed. Evidence is not specific and/or does not support the writer’s thesis statement. (11-20 points) |
Includes at least three textual references to back up thesis or central point. This evidence is specific, complex and thoroughly explained, and/or analyzed. Evidence is quoted or paraphrased and clearly supports the writer’s thesis statement. (21-30 points) |
Essay Structure (20%) |
Essay does not have introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Body paragraphs are not clear. (1-6 points) |
Essay has and introduction and a conclusion. Includes body paragraphs. (7-13 points) |
Essay has a clear introduction, conclusion and clear body paragraphs. Paragraphs have topic sentences. Conclusion summarizes the point of the essay. (14 – 20 points) |
Grammar (20%) |
The essay clearly has not been edited. There are numerous spelling, punctuation errors, and sentence structure problems. There are errors when using MLA format. (1-6 points) |
There are few spelling errors. Student uses mostly proper grammar, including correct punctuation and sentence structure in most cases. There may be errors when using MLA format. (7-13 points) |
Essay uses correct grammar, including spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. Sentences are complete. Student uses capitalization where needed. Citation references follow the MLA format. Work has clearly been edited. (14 – 20 points) |
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