I need revisions made to my paper per my professors comments. She says that the grammar was not good and other comments. I have pasted her comments below to reference to:
PROFESSOR WRITES:
This has grammar and other problems – not horribly except the omission of adequate citations. It is urgent that whole paragraphs and sections have a reference. Many of these paragraphs seemed general, opinion, and no citations. The “meat” was good but needs a bit more organizing.
So I need you to do the following:
1. Run the paper through grammarly or a grammar site to fix all the grammatical errors. (US. ENGLISH GRAMMAR PLEASE)
2. Include in-text citations to back up claims throughout the paper…there should be one in every paragraph (ONLY USE SCHOLARLY SOURCES 5 YEARS OLD OR NEWER IN THE SOCIAL WORK FIELD)
3. Exclude any opinionated information that does not sound factual and replace with fact based information with a citation.
4. DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!
5. ADD a little more concrete and fact based information to back up my claim in the paper
6. KEEP APA FORMATTING
7. USE EDIT TRACKER SO I CAN SEE WHAT CHANGES HAVE BEEN MADE TO THE PAPER….THEN UPLOAD THE TRACKED PAPER AND A FINAL VERSION WITHOUT TRACKING PLEASE
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