MAKE REVISIONS TO PERSUASIVE ESSAY PER THE INSTRUCTORS COMMENTS BELOW:

PROFESSOR:

This is really well done, Latasha. You have chosen a perfectly appropriate topic, banning plastic bags. You state your thesis simply and directly, right in the intro paragraph and in the third person point of view. You have strong arguments against using plastic bags and your essay is written well!

You need more research. The purpose of a research essay is clear: to connect your work to a larger body of literature. Using sources shows how your ideas build upon the ideas of previous writers and researchers and why your claims merit consideration–because they are supported by experts in the field. It adds validity and credibility to your arguments.

When you add that info, make sure it, and all your essay, is APA formatted: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01…

Lastly, you need to address the opposing view and use it as an opportunity to strengthen your argument.

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