This essay can be pretty good with a few tweaks. For one, your essay needs some work bringing some ideas together ore clearly. This could be a matter of adding a few well-placed sentences to introduce or indicate the relationship between your ideas. For example, sometimes you throw in a quote, but I feel as though I need a little more context before or an introductory phrase/transition before the quote to understand your point more quickly. You also have very weak transitions at some points. Last, your intro is a little rushed. This can be a point where you can expand and make your essay more fluid and interesting.

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