1. I would like to have a complete thesis statement that can connect the essay together.
In this story, Alex emphasizes three main themes repeatedly and interchangeably which are war, Reservation Relationships and the power of music to represent ( complete the thesis statement)
2. Help me to edit the sentence structure. make some change to the sentence structure
3. the word choice
4. please help me to write a new conclusion that can connect the essay together
5 .please underline the edit parts, so it is easy to read for me.
I will also provide one A essay that my classmate wrote, hope that will be good for you.
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